# Delores: German translation

**URL:** https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335
**Category:** Delores Engine
**Created:** [June 1, 2020, 2:31pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335 "2020-06-01T14:31:24Z")
**Posts on this page:** 20
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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 1, 2020, 2:31pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/1 "2020-06-01T14:31:24Z")

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Start working on German translation. TSV first.

Leaving dilly-dallying to Boris of course. 😉

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 1, 2020, 10:24pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/2 "2020-06-01T22:24:02Z")

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521/1482

Need to get some sleep now. 😉

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### Author: ![Guga](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/guga/32/14476_2.png) [@Guga](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Guga)
#### Post date: [June 2, 2020, 11:05am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/3 "2020-06-02T11:05:28Z")

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As I said for the Dutch version, if you need help with the art I’m happy to help 🙂

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 2, 2020, 9:00pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/4 "2020-06-02T21:00:07Z")

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I very likely will need help there, as I stay away from Adobe products. 😉

730/1482

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### Author: ![Festarossa](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/festarossa/32/15_2.png) [@Festarossa](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Festarossa)
#### Post date: [June 2, 2020, 10:28pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/5 "2020-06-02T22:28:57Z")

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I’m doing the Finnish translation in differently organized order, so I actually have no idea how much I have translated 🤔 I noticed many lines shared the contents, so I organized them alphabetically.

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 2, 2020, 11:48pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/6 "2020-06-02T23:48:07Z")

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I copied the \_en.tsv and committed it in my local working copy. So I can ask git all the time, how many lines I changed:

```
git diff Data/Translations_de.tsv | grep -Ec "^\+[0-9]+"

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846/1482

Its not boasting (how could it). Its just meant to be a WIP status report.

I btw. translate in the order of the rooms I’m playing. So I understand the context better. And less spoiler. This is a totally different adventure experince than anything before. A real developer adventure. 😉 I hang at the puzzle of how to effectively enable the translation\_markers. But no spoilers please. Coming back to it from time to time. 😉

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 4, 2020, 12:03am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/7 "2020-06-04T00:03:27Z")

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Are there any deadlines we should be aware of? 😉

1114/1482 (finally starts feeling like progress).

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 5, 2020, 10:28pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/8 "2020-06-05T22:28:28Z")

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1282/1482 (missleading as some lines need no translation)

Now “photo\_names” and a lot of articel correction, as I got the context wrong in the first round. And meanwhile seaching for Thomas Jefferson, without trying to cheat around in the code.

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 6, 2020, 11:45pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/9 "2020-06-06T23:45:31Z")

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TSV done. Putting it into family game testing before creating the PR.

@Guga if I send you the Text for the Startscreen, would you put it in the PSD and generate the PNG?

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### Author: ![Guga](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/guga/32/14476_2.png) [@Guga](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Guga)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2020, 7:19am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/10 "2020-06-07T07:19:28Z")

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Send me everything, I’ll do it as soon as I can.

I suppose you want me to generate also the Teil Zehn image for the intro screen?

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### Author: ![Rene](https://avatars.discourse-cdn.com/v4/letter/r/7cd45c/32.png) [@Rene](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Rene)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2020, 8:07pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/11 "2020-06-07T20:07:25Z")

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“Teil Zehn” as well would be great. 🙂

Now for the Startscreen text. Let me know, if something doesn’t fit from the available space and I’ll try to shorten it.

##Intro

Dieses Projekt fing als Prototyp für meine neue Adventure Game Engine  
an und wuchs langsam zu einem kleinen lustigen Spiel heran. Es ist  
keine Fortsetzung von Thimbleweek Park und es lässt sicherlich allen  
Schnickschnack vermissen, der für ein kommerzielles Spiel nötig wäre.

Es war spaßig und herausfordernd zugleich, weil wir fast ausschließlich  
‘gefundenes Material’ von Thimbleweed Park nehmen mussten, um die ganzen  
neuen Rätsel zu erstellen. Auch, weil wir nicht raus durften - IRL.

Als kleines Dankeschön an unsere Fans, veröffentlichen wir es gratis,  
als etwas, das Spaß bringt in diesen skurrilen Zeiten.

Es wird vermutlich ständig abstürzen und auf exotischer oder alter  
Hardware gar nicht erst laufen. Bitte überfordert nicht unseren _einen_  
Supportmitarbeiter.

Vielen Dank an David, Robert, Katerina und Octavi für Eure Hilfe.

Viel Spaß … und klickt zum Fortfahren.

Mac / Windows Referenz Karte  
Steuerung - nur Maus

- Links-Klick um sich zu bewegen. Oder…

- Links-Klick um auszuführen, was der Cursor zeigt.

- Rechts-Klick auf ein Objekt um mehr Befehle zu sehen.

- Links-Doppel-Klick um schnell zu laufen.

- Rechts-Doppel-Klick tut nix. Lass es sein.

- Ziehe Inventarobjekte auf andere Objekte um auszuführen, was der Cursor zeigt.  
Wenn kein Cursortext auftaucht, dann können die Objekte nicht zusammen benutzt werden.

- ESC überspringt unsere _eine_ Zwischensequenz.

- Leertaste pausiert das Spiel.

- Punkt “.” überspringt die aktuelle Dialogzeile.

- “I” zeigt/versteckt das Inventar

- Zahnrad oben rechts zeigt das Optionsmenü.

Es gibt kein Tutorial… wir vertrauen auf dich.  
Es gibt keine Sprachausgabe… wir mussten Geld für Toilettenpapierhamsterkäufe sparen.  
Es gibt keine Speicherstände, jedoch wird der Fortschritt gesichert, wenn du Natalies  
Aufgaben erfüllt hast. Spiele erneut für weitere Aufgaben.

Das ergibt alles mehr Sinn, wenn du erstmal anfängst zu spielen.

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### Author: ![Vit\_Condak](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/vit_condak/32/3059_2.png) [@Vit\_Condak](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Vit_Condak)
#### Post date: [June 7, 2020, 10:09pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/12 "2020-06-07T22:09:17Z")

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“Kateřina”! 😉

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### Author: ![Nor\_Treblig](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/nor_treblig/32/216_2.png) [@Nor\_Treblig](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Nor_Treblig)
#### Post date: [June 8, 2020, 12:03am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/13 "2020-06-08T00:03:00Z")

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> [@Rene](#):
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> Thimblewee **k** Park

Auto-correct? Speaks for you 🙂

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### Author: ![Guga](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/guga/32/14476_2.png) [@Guga](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Guga)
#### Post date: [June 8, 2020, 6:58am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/14 "2020-06-08T06:58:42Z")

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I’ll do it this evening, yesterday I didn’t feel good and I went straight to sleep 👍

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### Author: ![Guga](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/guga/32/14476_2.png) [@Guga](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Guga)
#### Post date: [June 8, 2020, 6:27pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/15 "2020-06-08T18:27:33Z")

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The first, second and fourth paragraph in the first page are each one line too long. The main problem are the long words that go to a new line wasting a lot of space. Maybe we can hyphenate some.

Also the “Ziehe Inventarobjekte” is too long and unfortunately also the savegame one ends up having “Aufgaben” on a new line.

And a last question:

> [@Rene](#):
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> ESC überspringt unsere _eine_ Zwischensequenz.

why is eine in italic, und why unsere?

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### Author: ![Guga](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/guga/32/14476_2.png) [@Guga](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Guga)
#### Post date: [June 8, 2020, 6:34pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/16 "2020-06-08T18:34:17Z")

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![image](https://canada1.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/uploads/thimbleweedpark/original/2X/1/104a41d2e5a60d53436b6a960630d64be2d744d2.jpeg)

This is as a reference for your future work

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#### Post date: [June 8, 2020, 9:36pm UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/17 "2020-06-08T21:36:50Z")

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> [@Guga](#):
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> why is eine in italic, und why unsere?

It has to just be “ESC überspringt eine Zweischensequenz.” Without “unsere” and there is no need for italic.

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### Author: ![Nor\_Treblig](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex030/user_avatar/forums.thimbleweedpark.com/nor_treblig/32/216_2.png) [@Nor\_Treblig](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/u/Nor_Treblig)
#### Post date: [June 9, 2020, 3:19am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/18 "2020-06-09T03:19:21Z")

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> [@Someone](#):
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> It has to just be “ESC überspringt eine Zwischensequenz.” Without “unsere” and there is no need for italic.

“unsere eine” is OK, it means “unsere einzige” (“our one, single cutscene”).  
(It’s a little joke since typically you’d have a button to skip cutscene **s**. But for this mini-adventure the button can only affect a single one.)

Something similar is meant with “our product support person”, person in singular.

> [@Guga](#):
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> This is as a reference for your future work

Just a note: It didn’t include the fixes mentioned before your post.

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#### Post date: [June 9, 2020, 8:32am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/19 "2020-06-09T08:32:08Z")

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> [@Nor\_Treblig](#):
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> “unsere eine” is OK, it means “unsere einzige” (“our one, single cutscene”).

Oh, yes. In that case I would use “unsere einzige”. “Unsere eine” sounds more like slang and the first time I read it, it felt wrong.

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#### Post date: [June 9, 2020, 8:42am UTC](https://forums.thimbleweedpark.com/t/delores-german-translation/4335/20 "2020-06-09T08:42:17Z")

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I agree it’s more “slang”. I think it’s better for the joke.  
But it’s right that it’s easy to read wrong. Which was also the reason it was written in italic to put emphasis on this word so people read it more likely correct.

But maybe “einzige” is better because of more clarity. I’m just glad I’m not a translator during my day job 🙂

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