I’ll try decrease the light source on the left instead…
…there… I’ve removed much of the light source behind the employee. I think it’s better now 
good suggestion!
edit: even more aggressive removal:
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Chop Quest is good, but the first part of your second suggestion is a gay slur.
Let’s choose an adjective that starts with a different letter. How about “wonderful”? But then the game would be about a very different person 
“WAG” is short for “wife or girlfriend” of a sports player. A WAG often has a glamorous lifestyle and is talked about a lot in the media.
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Errr… it’s no longer in the google app store?
Uh… no, it’s not anymore 
long story. I’ll put it back somewhen in the next months.
https://store.steampowered.com/app/1251910/Kill_Yourself/ you can hear the theme in the trailer video here 
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Still… how *beep*ing awesome would it be to have your music done by Michael Land?
Or Peter McConnel?
Why not Matthew Kane? He’s probably easier to get in touch with…We all know a guy who knows him very well…
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It’s that I feel more comfortable insulting Guga than insulting Michael Land, but we’ll see…
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I like the lighting on the girls here
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You do? I was going to change it… seems too dark and desaturated… 
I really do, it feels right with the backlight and all.
I’d mayyyyybe add longer shadows, as the light comes from behind.
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right… I did that for the chest, but I forgot for the girls…
I have a lot of these retouches to do…
The light is generally speaking awesome!
I also like the fact the girls are way too small for their surroundings. Which gives it a more faerie tale feel.
LOWQ: Little Olivia’s Woodchopping Quest
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Or “Little Olivia in her Quest to Chop the Wood”.
I like all these suggestions… but I don’t want any reference to wood and chopping in the title; that would “sterilize” the most important joke in the game, which should instead grab you and make you want to play…
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In that case, what about just “Olivia’s Quest” or “Little Olivia’s Quest”?
the name Olivia doesn’t convey anything important… I prefer the more generic “Little Girl” …
So… what about “Little Girl’s Quest”? Ok but “Little Girl In Monsterland” is more interesting to me… (Just like “Guybrush’s Quest” wouldn’t be better than “Monkey Island”…)
I actually quite like the idea of a little girl accomplishing an epic quest. Then it becomes parodistic… but it’s good if at least in the title it feels a bit epic.
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Aside from the title music, I think each location could have a 3-seconds jingle, when you enter. … (then silence, for the reasons stated above…)
this would establish the mood of the location…
Each? Isn’t that too annoying? 